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Bu sayfada, IELTS (International English Language Testing System) Eğitimi Programı hakkında detaylı bilgiye ulaşabilirsiniz.
Size Aşağıda writingden 7,5 skor almış olan bir writing örneği sunduk, Değerlendirme yapan kişinin yorumu;
Verilen konuda öğrencinin yazdığı şeyler,bu yazının da yazılış amacıdır. Verilen konuyu güzelce ele alan ve ayrınıtıları ile açıklayan bir metindir. Verilmek istenen mesaj ve tartışılan düşünceler açıkça ifade edilmiştir.Önemli noktalar iyi değerlendirilmiş ve örneklerle desteklenmiştir.
Düzenlemesi güzel yapılmış, verilmek istenen mesaj paragraflarda konu bütünlüğü içerisinde açıklanmıştır.Konu bütünlüğü ve geçişlerdeki hatalar değerlendirmemizi etkilemektedir.
İfadelerdeki yetersizliğe ve basit hatalara rağmen zengin kelime dağarcığı yerli yerinde kullanılmıştır.Bir çok karmaşık yapı kullanılmış fakat burada 8 puana ulaşılmasını engelleyen hatalar ve eksiklikler (bazı ön eklerde ve temel özne/yüklem uyumlarında).
Yine de bu hatalar mesajın verilmesini engellememiştir.Kullanılan dil ustalık seviyesindedir.
“Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This argument may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise althought they don’t really need the products.
Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeus and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without anough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Futhermore, as many customers buy a particular product, due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.
On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Morever, it is people’s choice to make decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of costumers’ buying habits. Individuals have their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not. In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They connot be simply swayed by those advertisements.
In conculision, as costumers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is beter to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyone is swayed by advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in sensitive area of business such as toy industries, it may be necessary to band advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need. “
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